Two Perfect Poems

in their different ways, and with all their necessary imperfections:

Hart Crane, Voyages II

—And yet this great wink of eternity,

Of rimless floods, unfettered leewardings,   

Samite sheeted and processioned where   

Her undinal vast belly moonward bends,   

Laughing the wrapt inflections of our love;

Take this Sea, whose diapason knells   

On scrolls of silver snowy sentences,

The sceptred terror of whose sessions rends   

As her demeanors motion well or ill,   

All but the pieties of lovers’ hands.

And onward, as bells off San Salvador   

Salute the crocus lustres of the stars,

In these poinsettia meadows of her tides,—

Adagios of islands, O my Prodigal,

Complete the dark confessions her veins spell.

Mark how her turning shoulders wind the hours,   

And hasten while her penniless rich palms   

Pass superscription of bent foam and wave,—

Hasten, while they are true,—sleep, death, desire,   

Close round one instant in one floating flower.

Bind us in time, O Seasons clear, and awe.   

O minstrel galleons of Carib fire,

Bequeath us to no earthly shore until

Is answered in the vortex of our grave

The seal’s wide spindrift gaze toward paradise.

William Carlos Williams, Spring and All I

By the road to the contagious hospital

under the surge of the blue

mottled clouds driven from the

northeast—a cold wind. Beyond, the

waste of broad, muddy fields

brown with dried weeds, standing and fallen

patches of standing water

the scattering of tall trees

All along the road the reddish

purplish, forked, upstanding, twiggy

stuff of bushes and small trees

with dead, brown leaves under them

leafless vines—

Lifeless in appearance, sluggish

dazed spring approaches—

They enter the new world naked,

cold, uncertain of all

save that they enter. All about them

the cold, familiar wind—

Now the grass, tomorrow

the stiff curl of wildcarrot leaf

One by one objects are defined—

It quickens: clarity, outline of leaf

But now the stark dignity of

entrance—Still, the profound change

has come upon them: rooted, they

grip down and begin to awaken

Poems Getting near the Limit

I think these are excellent poems, imaginative & inventive. But I can sympathise if you think they aren't poems, or not worthwhile poems. They are all from Jeff Hilson's anthology, The Reality Street Book of Sonnets (Reality Street Editions, 2008). The Spahr poem could probably be classed as a specimen of "Conceptual poetry", where the interest is in the act of processing of existing texts, data or language - though I think more than that is going on in it than that.

Juliana Spahr, from Power Sonnets

After Kendra Mayfield

“Why Girls Don’t Compute,” Wired Website, 3:00 a.m. Apr.20, 2000 PDT

Educators must change the way that they teach to attract girls

to technology. With the rise of technology-related jobs, experts fear girls

who lack computing skills might be left behind. It’s imperative that girls

who are under represented, have computer fluency. Girls

have misconceptions of what computer fluency would lead to. Girls

are getting a distorted view. Yet there are ways to get girls

into computer culture. Reports urge educators to teach girls

sophisticated technology skills. Teachers can re-engage girls

who might be disinterested in traditional computing courses. Girls

are also turned off to technology through computer games. Girls

dislike violent video games. But some researchers think girls

don’t need pink software. But others think software should go straight to girls’

interests. “Software is primarily aimed at boys. To counteract that, we desperately need software out there for girls”; “It’s not really violence that turns girls

off”, repetitious, boring games are more likely to turn girls off than violence. Researchers also stressed educating girls.

 Jen Bervin, from Nets

5

Those hours, that with gentle work did frame

The lovely gaze where every eye doth dwell,

Will play the tyrants to the very same

And that unfair which fairly doth excel:

For never-resting Time leads summer on

To hideous winter, and confounds him there;

Sap checked with frost and lusty leaves quite gone,

Beauty o'ersnowed and bareness every where:

Then, were not summer's distillation left,

A liquid prisoner pent in walls of glass,

Beauty's effect with beauty were bereft,

Nor it, nor no remembrance what it was:

   But flowers distilled though they with winter meet,

   Leese but their show; their substance still lives sweet.

63

Against my love shall be as I am now,

With Time's injurious hand crush'd and o'er-worn;

When hours have drained his blood and filled his brow

With lines and wrinkles; when his youthful morn

Hath travelled on to age's steepy night;

And all those beauties whereof now he's king

Are vanishing or vanished out of sight,

Stealing away the treasure of his spring;

For such a time do I now fortify

Against confounding age's cruel knife,

That he shall never cut from memory

My sweet love's beauty, though my lover's life:

   His beauty shall in these black lines be seen,

   And they shall live, and he in them still green.

Abigail Oborne, from lovebaby

 

Stort Poetry Group Meeting Tuesday November 5

Next meeting is on Tuesday, November 5. Sorry! But a music event in the Rhodes on Wednesday would effectively render the bar unusable by us.  As now usual this autumn, in the Bar at the Rhodes Centre, 7.30 till about 10.30. Two courses as it were, with some common theme maybe: Sheila Moy would like to introduce the poetry of e e cummings; and we have also arranged to consider Language, Poetry & Communication: just what is poetry? does it need rules? how does it communicate? what is a poem? what isn’t a poem? I suggest we bring problems, questions, examples, poems, that either work to perfection, or things that really ask the question “Is this a poem?” (and maybe even answer it.) If anyone wants anything copied, do send it to me, and I’ll make sure it’s available for Tuesday.

We also need to really begin to lay plans for the International Night on February if this is to work successfully.

I will post up some  e e cummings shortly, and some material I might throw into the debate on Tuesday, conceptual, minimalist & neo-dada materia